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Posted on 22 Jun 2011 06:08 pm by blix


TWC: sketch of a panel from the next page. Snarling wolf made me smile. c: XD Vidu would deserve it if the wolf bit him... you'll see why.

There's a really dumb amazing comic about the creative process on facebook. Click if you feel like reading something dumb amazing.

Also, I've edited the past two pages twice. oAo I don't think my writing was clear enough. There are three characters involved in the written parts. There is Vidu, the wolf, and a first person narrator. The edits were to try and make it more obvious that all words in quotations were belonging to Vidu, all words outside of quotations were belonging to the narrator. The wolf did not speak on the last page. (Yes, this chapter, you WILL discover who the narrator is, and why they tell this story, and to who. X3)

So if you want to go back and reread the last pages and offer suggestions or see that there is an improvement, please do. c:

 
 


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Posted by Teto-Fujoshi (Guest) on 22 Jun 2011 10:26 pm!
Can't wait for more!

Posted by Nalai (Guest) on 23 Jun 2011 04:14 am!
I love it when I follow a link off the side of another webcomic and end up loving what I find...

impressed Posted by Jety Lefr on 23 Jun 2011 05:55 am!
wow... I really love the hairband/river.

Posted by Shaharw (Guest) on 23 Jun 2011 10:34 am!
Lurv the last panel!

"All birds like me are shiny" lol - I shouldn't read this while at work - my co-workers think I'm insane anyway!

Posted by Emma (Guest) on 23 Jun 2011 02:16 pm!
Iss it okay with you if I completeply ship the Wolf and Vidu? I call them Vidna :)

Posted by blix (Guest) on 23 Jun 2011 02:32 pm!
@emma
lol, have at it. The wolf would like to know why the name isn't Sedu though. XD

@Jety Lefr
hairband/river. XD the thing has sort of become a design element more than an actual object...

Posted by moonbeam (Guest) on 24 Jun 2011 12:49 pm!
sweetie, i love the art in this comic, but it is confusing as hell. get a writer to help you write it. please.

Posted by blix on 24 Jun 2011 02:54 pm!
@moonbeam

I've read your complaints before.

You may stop reading.

Do not call me a sweetie if your intent is to tear down the thing I care about.

Don't change a thing. Posted by Thinkin'ABit (Guest) on 24 Jun 2011 03:04 pm!
I happen to /love/ your writing style. It has a beautiful, mythic feel to it (fitting, since it's a creation myth). I find myself caring about the characters very deeply, and I also find the plot to be very inspiring. That all this is paired with some of the most breathtaking art on the internet is just another massive plus. Keep it up and don't listen to the trolls. <3

Posted by MaxTheMinimum on 25 Jun 2011 12:33 am!
I can't say that the comic isn't confusing; it is. However, I rather enjoy it; I want to continue reading to find out what is going on. Also, I believe you've said multiple times that this is meant to be read all at once, not one page a week.

One more thing: hola, Jety. Did not know you read this comic.

Posted by dantespimp on 25 Jun 2011 12:49 am!
You really hit the nail there, Max. XD This type of comic isn't your typical narrative where every page is its own individual short story and, voila, done until the next update. Each page is actually a part of something bigger. As a result, people just have to be patient. The answers will come. <3

Posted by Nodzia-went-where on 26 Jun 2011 09:24 pm!
Flirty~

Posted by Nalai (Guest) on 28 Jun 2011 08:26 pm!
It's really not hard at all to understand... As long as you leave room in your head for some questions